Aye my life,
In a world wrought with strife
How do I begin to confess
Of my great distress,
Over Coca Cola versus Pepsi, in a world full of carbon
Which fizzes more?
For the Trifextra Writing Challenge this weekend, a 33 word confession had to be composed!
An unusual confession. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank You Joe, your piece is also very good! :-)
DeleteThat is a good question...I don't drink either one :)
ReplyDeleteGood decision Janna, best to have teeth and your health! For me, it's a once in a blue moon vice, but it is amazing that there is a difference in taste for both!
DeleteVery creative... I think Dr. Pepper fizzes most, and usually at the most inopportune times. Nice visuals too.
ReplyDeleteHahaha Lane, don't you just want to Thank all the makers of Dr. Pepper, Coke/Pepsi, and others for the great times that we have had in suppressing our glorious natural inklings in public!? Wonderful Writing too!
DeleteThis is a good way to get out of a juicy confession of contrition. Good job.
ReplyDelete" :-) " Ann! On a more serious note though, I wanted this piece to be light after writing other serious pieces, I can neither agree or disagree though with wanting to get away from confessing!
Deletewater with lemon for me, please. :)
ReplyDeleteIndeed Barbara, especially too after a nice can of Pepsi! :-)
ReplyDeletea great puzzle. Well confessed.
ReplyDeleteThank You Vivin, Congratulations on your degree and writings, I am looking forward to reading your War Memoirs!
ReplyDeleteWhat a unique take! :D
ReplyDeleteThank You Draug!
Deletehaha, unique.
ReplyDeleteBarbara @ allmylivesnow.blogspot.com
Thank You Barbara!
DeleteYep. A very important admission:-) (RogRites)
ReplyDeleteThank You BetaRules, Great Job with your piece too!
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