24 May 2013

Pepsi!


Aye my life,
In a world wrought with strife
How do I begin to confess
Of my great distress,
Over Coca Cola versus Pepsi, in a world full of carbon
Which fizzes more?

For the Trifextra Writing Challenge this weekend, a 33 word confession had to be composed!

18 comments:

  1. An unusual confession. Nicely done!

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    1. Thank You Joe, your piece is also very good! :-)

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  2. That is a good question...I don't drink either one :)

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    1. Good decision Janna, best to have teeth and your health! For me, it's a once in a blue moon vice, but it is amazing that there is a difference in taste for both!

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  3. Very creative... I think Dr. Pepper fizzes most, and usually at the most inopportune times. Nice visuals too.

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    1. Hahaha Lane, don't you just want to Thank all the makers of Dr. Pepper, Coke/Pepsi, and others for the great times that we have had in suppressing our glorious natural inklings in public!? Wonderful Writing too!

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  4. This is a good way to get out of a juicy confession of contrition. Good job.

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    1. " :-) " Ann! On a more serious note though, I wanted this piece to be light after writing other serious pieces, I can neither agree or disagree though with wanting to get away from confessing!

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  5. water with lemon for me, please. :)

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  6. Indeed Barbara, especially too after a nice can of Pepsi! :-)

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  7. a great puzzle. Well confessed.

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  8. Thank You Vivin, Congratulations on your degree and writings, I am looking forward to reading your War Memoirs!

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  9. haha, unique.

    Barbara @ allmylivesnow.blogspot.com

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  10. Yep. A very important admission:-) (RogRites)

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  11. Thank You BetaRules, Great Job with your piece too!

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